Okay. Great! Thanks for letting me into your world for a little bit. I think this could really shine! What I'll do, then, is nest the comments under this one. You'll be able to see them all in one place, and they'll be a little out of the way. Anyone else could see them, too, if they looked, but they won't draw anyone's attention from your beautiful poem. And bear in mind that these are just my thoughts. Don't feel obligated to change anything just because I point something out. :)