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tei_syiem

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So warm I wished to stay forever, So beautiful it could cure a fever. Untouchable, so I admired from afar, Always blazing, turning reality to her star. Softly, quietly, I suffer, The love for her feels even nearer. Dying, I wrote my heart on paper, She’ll never know my heart was hers forever. Black eyes with the brightest soul, She looked into me, and I was hollow. How beautiful it all could be, That I forgot the weight of me. The soul yearns for the sunset’s glow, But my broken heart does not deserve to know. Golden rays fading, cigarette burning, I was only waiting, for nothing returning.

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Profile picture of user: mirroquill

It's too simple but rhythmic and fire.

Profile picture of user: https_outh

I admire you for those expressions

Profile picture of user: quiet_pages

Chef's Kiss. And the pain of unrequited love... Nevertheless, an awesome piece!💫✨️✨️

Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Wow, ❤️

Profile picture of user: omokushe

This is so descriptive, and truly brilliant. Good job

Profile picture of user: penaiku

Hi @tei_syiem, welcome to the TIP family ✨❤️