Brief kiss

5w•©

brief kiss,
bare to the eye,
beautiful enough to make time doubt itself.

                    ~

bacio breve,
banale per chi guarda,
bello abbastanza da far dubitare il tempo.

#alliter

Comments(12)

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lifeinslomo

Won't you agree so much gets lost in translation?

lifeinslomo

Ugh. Obsessed! So this is how Italian sound like. I bet i botched the language reading the Italian part out loud 😬

lyra

oh I love this!! that's awesome that it works in both!

sidusferam

Damn to be able to do it in both languages is so impressive. So beautiful ❤️👏

aeris222

For me, it was easier to create the alliteration in Italian, so I’m not entirely sure if it sounds fully correct in English. If anything feels off in the translation, please let me know.