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sidusferam

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I am whatever you say I am, I am what I say I am. I say; I am a river, flowing towards More than I am. I am fire, I burn to destroy, I Burn to purify. I am air, What you cannot see but feel. I am thunder, Raging at the enemy that seeks my soul. I am rain, My heart gladly falls towards love and hope. I am a guest, Thirsty and curious. I am human, Blood and incomplete.

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Profile picture of user: perfect_affizie

"Raging at the enemy that seeks my soul" - you sound protected and unprotected at the same time 😁 I'm still thinking 🤔 about it 😜 But the way you said "l am what l say l am" -- l believe you. More than l should after one read 😊

Profile picture of user: creativechronicle

Felt this one ❤imagery is soo so good A lovely piece

Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

Bruv! I swear our ideas synced today. My initial thought was writing something along these lines like yours. It was just that my head was all muddled up and I got lost on the way 👽 But then again, seeing a poem like this, and so carefully and exquisitely crafted, makes me happy. . I adore how this poem has all the elements of nature and finally shifts to the final couplet keeping it grounded in humility with "blood and incomplete". This speaks volumes. Wow!!!