Bruv! I swear our ideas synced today. My initial thought was writing something along these lines like yours. It was just that my head was all muddled up and I got lost on the way 👽 But then again, seeing a poem like this, and so carefully and exquisitely crafted, makes me happy. . I adore how this poem has all the elements of nature and finally shifts to the final couplet keeping it grounded in humility with "blood and incomplete". This speaks volumes. Wow!!!