Lol. That's so relatable! Especially with what I post online, I often get that same "just get it out there" feeling! And I didn't mean to insinuate that you needed to change anything. I just wanted to share my personal reading experience so you had some feedback on what the poem was doing, that way you could decide for yourself if it was the intended effect. I know I love getting comments like that, regardless of if I eventually agree or disagree with them. I look forward to reading more!