a_p_wyndham's commented: Oh. I hope you didn't take that the wrong way! I like the poem a lot. Actually, the first couple caught me off-guard (not in a bad way), but as they continued I got pulled into the rhythm. I think they make a ton of sense with the internal logic of the poem.

Oh. I hope you didn't take that the wrong way! I like the poem a lot. 

Actually, the first couple caught me off-guard (not in a bad way), but as they continued I got pulled into the rhythm. I think they make a ton of sense with the internal logic of the poem. 

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Naw, why should I take it the wrong way! I appreciate every feedback xoxo