When the heart stops being a heart, when it just wouldn't, because it happens sometimes and there's no actual diagnosis even though the doctors tried and your friends tried even harder, when it cannot anymore hear the music or smell the parsley, when it refuses to touch the food or come out of the room, you must be ready. You must be ready to leave everything behind, Leave that call unattended, Run out of the cubicle of your office. Do not stop to talk to children or birds. Make your way towards where it waits, climb into bed and lie next to it. Take its trembling hands. Hold it, and do not let go.

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Profile picture of user: rira

At this point just give me classes πŸ˜­πŸ’—

Profile picture of user: perfect_affizie

This hit hard πŸ˜” but in the best way. You wrote exactly what it feels like when someone goes quiet and nothing helps except just being there. That last line got me β€” β€œHold it, and do not let go.” Beautiful work.🌹πŸ₯°

Profile picture of user: creativechronicle

Wow ❀ it's so amazing πŸ‘ a πŸ’ bouquet for you

Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

I really like the way you forced line breaks and used punctuation as caesuras in odd places. It really added a lot of weight to the contemplative tone. πŸ‘πŸ»

Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Talking to children does heal a heart, i have proofπŸ₯Ίβ€οΈ Beautiful poem my bud