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Profile picture of user: s_zaynab_kamoonpury

Conceit?? And Thanks so much for critique, i like your way for you actually give an edit suggestion and not just ask to tweak without elaboration.

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Profile picture of user: perfect_affizie

You're always welcome dear 🥰 Oh don't get me wrong 🙏 *Literary conceit*: An extended metaphor or idea that controls an entire poem or piece of writing. The writer takes one comparison and develops it through multiple images, lines, or stanzas. The metaphor isn’t just decoration — it’s the structure. *Example*: Saying “grief is grammar” and then showing how loss gets edited, revised, and rewritten like language across the whole poem.👌 I hope you get me now💗🙏