Hey, just wanted to say, I know I haven't been active here for very long so there's a lot I've missed, but this is probably my favorite of your pieces I've read. The breathless jumping from one interconnected image to the next works really well with the concrete "crooked spine" that you've shaped with the words themselves. It's sensitive and slightly melancholic, which is my favorite pairing for poetry. I especially love the "comb the wind's wild hair" turn. 😁