Also, if it helps: remember that punctuation should always serve the idea. Every poet has their own style, and some people use very little (or none). I tend to be hyper-articulate with my punctuation, but that's my way—writing with breath, with thought segments. So when you look over what I posted, don't take it as gospel. Just another poet's take on it. You could also tweak wording, line breaks, and enjambment to enhance flow, if you wanted. Hope that helps & doesn't sound pretentious of me