Somber stillness settles like silk Bedsheets overstretched on the yard. Next to me, your rocking chair creaks The tally; and I am leaking Out of swollen eyes, and my breath Expels heavy clouds, losing heat. I cannot look up, but I see In the splinters a chasm grown. If only you would lay on me, Our bodies could burn. I know it. Cremation as liberation; And we would outlast our sun. Do you suppose you might want to? Lie with me and kindle the stars?

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Profile picture of user: lyra

oh wow, this is stunning. I think this might be one of my favorites

Profile picture of user: perfect_affizie

This is stunning and it hurts a little 🥰 “Somber stillness settles like silk” — how do you even write a line that soft and heavy?😇🥹 “Lie with me and kindle the stars” has me in a puddle.🍮 Thank you for sharing this. I’m sitting with it👌🫂

Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

...I am leaking/out of swollen eyes... Ah, i love how this doesn't tell but show, that also explains how good a writer you are.. The last question cuts and I love how you've used 'kindle' here ❤️

Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Oof allow my body to burn if it ends up kindling the stars ✨ Oh the liberation! My goodness! You are too good. Such a beautiful write😭❤️❤️