How brightly stars are left to shine, Shine behind the curtains of my eyes— Eyes that nightly watch your silhouette Silhouette, in turn, the world's skies; Skies that pit you against Orion (Orion will always lose the belt), Belt together the seams of space. Space is not so scary with you there. There are other challengers too, Too prideful of their form to notice— Notice how you overtake them, Them who have lost their grip on me.

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Profile picture of user: perfect_affizie

This is tender and strong 💗🤩 😘Love itet

Profile picture of user: karlie_vanwyk

You write absolutely beautiful

Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

The title and the poem together makes for a wonderful reading. Commendable 🎊

Profile picture of user: gingerbread

May I compare this to the milky way galaxy? 🤧

Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Man that last stanza was written for me...there is victory in that verse!🥺❤️ Whole poem,beautiful. You are brilliant with words!❤️

Profile picture of user: taffie

Brilliant 👏