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sidusferam

12w•©

Save Me

Save me again my savior Savior, my flesh and soul are weak Weak like prey in the wild Wild are my thoughts and desires Desires with death on their heads. ~ couldn't reach 12 lines🙆

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perfect_affizie

12w

Don't worry about 12 lines - you said what you needed to say.😊 This is honestly good 🥰👏

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lifeinslomo

12w

No hard and fast rule that you have to do 12 lines I guess. Your poem is deeply human and real and relatable ❤️

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bluemoon_14

12w

Honestly this is amazing ❤️👏

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gingerbread

12w

It's very beautiful❤️❤️

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creativechronicle

12w

This is honestly amazing 👏 wooow❤❤

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a_p_wyndham

12w

No need to artificially expand it. I think you've excellently captured the very tight core of what you wanted to say and executed it well.