Save Me

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Save me again my savior
Savior, my flesh and soul are weak
Weak like prey in the wild
Wild are my thoughts and desires
Desires with death on their heads.

~ couldn't reach 12 lines🙆
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Comments(12)

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perfect_affizie

Don't worry about 12 lines - you said what you needed to say.😊
This is honestly good 🥰👏

lifeinslomo

No hard and fast rule that you have to do 12 lines I guess. 

Your poem is deeply human and real and relatable ❤️

bluemoon_14

Honestly this is amazing ❤️👏

gingerbread

It's very beautiful❤️❤️

creativechronicle

This is honestly amazing  👏 wooow❤❤

a_p_wyndham

No need to artificially expand it. I think you've excellently captured the very tight core of what you wanted to say and executed it well. 