Trust Once Had Now looks like Forgery by ink Gone Kin Side-eyes At Closed doors Love with a deadbolt Burnt Plates Passed quiet Salt tastes like Secrets kept warm Cold

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Profile picture of user: creativechronicle

Woow❤ amazing 👏

Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

I like the whole, and each lantern stanza individually, but I think the third and final one is 🤌😘 It's SO perfect in capturing a very specific kind of familial or romantic winter. I think the last two words, especially, "warm / Cold" pushing into each other with and without contradiction is the highlight. It's emotional release by descent. Very wonderful.

Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

Uh oh That first Lanturne is soo good

Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Dead love ❤️💔 Beautifully done