The Expired Love

12w•©

         Trust
      Once Had
    Now looks like
    Forgery by ink
           Gone 

           Kin 
      Side-eyes
   At Closed doors
  Love with a deadbolt 
          Burnt

        Plates 
   Passed quiet
  Salt tastes like
  Secrets kept warm 
         Cold
#lantern

Comments(8)

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creativechronicle

12w

Woow❤ amazing 👏  

a_p_wyndham

12w

I like the whole, and each lantern stanza individually, but I think the third and final one is 🤌😘

It's SO perfect in capturing a very specific kind of familial or romantic winter. I think the last two words, especially, "warm / Cold" pushing into each other with and without contradiction is the highlight. It's emotional release by descent. Very wonderful. 

lifeinslomo

12w

Uh oh 
That first Lanturne is soo good

sidusferam

12w

Dead love ❤️💔
Beautifully done 