Just need a seed Two hands that don't trip off A cup of dirt A vase or soil A sun full of light Water for growth Measure seasons Give it a name Trust the dark You're not the gardener You're a pardoner I don't know if it's a correct structured poem or not😄

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Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

I think it's excellently structured. And it made me think, too. That means it works. 💪

Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

You're not the gardener/you're the pardoner 🙌 Wooh! Beautiful ❤️

Profile picture of user: perfect_affizie

Pardoner. I'm gonna sit with that word for a while 😀

Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Oh fun and beautiful to read😁❤️ The second line made me laugh haha❤️