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missleo

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O April, you awaken my once-silent heart, Your breeze raises whispers upon my skin. Though your sun burns fierce and unrelenting, You arrive with rain— bringing growth, bringing coolness to seeds I thought long buried. You wash away my dust and heaviness, Leave me standing, lighter than before. The scent of wet soil—my quiet therapy, Your touch, both healer and home. You loosen my grip on what once was, Gently prying the past from my hands. After the storm I could not name, You reshape me—soft, yet whole again. You scatter unseen kisses upon my days, Even when I felt unworthy of my own breath. You fill the hollow spaces within me With something tender—something like love. You bring me peace, And soothe the aches I could not speak of. Oh April— Bearer of the golden sun and silver rain, You do not ask, Yet you restore. #ode

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Profile picture of user: rira

The calm in this poem is unmatched good job 🤍

Profile picture of user: perfect_affizie

"You loosen my grip on what once was" --- that's not a line, that's a lifeline 👏👏 For a first post, you write like rain💦: gentle, but it changes everything.😇 Keep going. We need this soft 💫💫

Profile picture of user: creativechronicle

😊 I think it's your first poem on the app and it's blowing me away 💖! Beautifully written 👏

Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

Your April is filled with goodness and beauty. I adore every line of this poem 😌

Profile picture of user: gingerbread

A real giver! Loved every line ❤️❤️

Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

I was working on my own challenge for November, but I couldn't force the words in a way that made me happy. Lol. You, on the other hand, have done an excellent job here. Love the pacing! Breeze to shower to aftermath is a wonderful symbolic arc.

Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Beautiful April poem😁❤️