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lifeinslomo

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I want to write about the stars and all the beautiful things, the grass, the birdsongs we carried from lip to lip like a child in a womb and the war and the fire that entered us like a slow fever and we were delirious when the fever broke and burnt our beds and wounded our bodies o wounded body through which my country sings o wounded body that refuses to die how lucky we are.

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Profile picture of user: rira

This piece sort of unravelled as it went such a nice journey🤍

Profile picture of user: perfect_affizie

You write like someone who carries both the wound and the witness in the same breath. That final “how lucky we are” cuts deeper here because it refuses to look away. 🙏🙏👏👏

Profile picture of user: lyra

I love this. you put words to the hard feelings so beautifully 💕

Profile picture of user: creativechronicle

Your poems are mind-blowing! 😊 Where should I start praising you - the imagery, emotions or the way you weave words.

Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Resilience. Survival. Hope Ah this poem should be a national anthem. Absolutely powerful my friend❤️❤️