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lyra

2w

for someone who claims not to be a musician, this poem has such a natural and musical rhythm to it. especially love this one as a musician myself, beautiful job :)

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a_p_wyndham

2w

Awh, shucks. Thank you so much! 😊 I'm glad you like it. It's a little outside of my normal depresso-espresso register, so it was really fun to toy with and figure out. To be honest, I am regretting the last two lines a little bit now. I think they jar the rhythm just a bit too much for my taste. But the poem liked them enough to convince me to post it at the time, so it lives on its own now, as is. 😂