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Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

Biblical and Daoist echoes here. "Thou shalt love thy neighbor as thyself, " (KJV, book of Matthew); "Love the world as your own self; and then you can truly care for all things," (Tao Te Ching, poem 13). Nice synthesis!

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Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

The risky thing about writing such poems is that it may end up sounding too preachy 😂 hard to balance words under the circumstances.