a_p_wyndham's commented: Hey, and if it sounds right to you, that's what's important. I apologize if you felt like I was attacking your work. My intent was only to provide craft-focused feedback. Writing what you did with English as a non-native tongue is already incredibly impressive!

Hey, and if it sounds right to you, that's what's important.

I apologize if you felt like I was attacking your work. My intent was only to provide craft-focused feedback. Writing what you did with English as a non-native tongue is already incredibly impressive! 

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s_zaynab_kamoonpury

Im glad you think so,  of course we can't be perfect in english like you the english. Just like you can't get the nuances and perfection of my mother tongue Urdu ☺️. And no i don't mind constructive criticism, but if i feel its biased and prejudiced then only does it hurt. Cheers,