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Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

I'm happy you think so! I know it's always a mixed bag with my writing. I use a lot of forms, styles, and techniques (sometimes even accidentally lol), but this one felt like it deserved to be raw. I've never really done the plain confessional like this, especially with the all lowercase letters aesthetic. If it landed and made you feel something, I'll call that success. 😁

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Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

the lowercase usage reminds me of e.e.cummings and I love the small detail about that. Oh, it landed alright. It landed very well