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Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

Simple words, complex feeling. I think we've all been there, when we either wanted help but couldn't articulate it, or when there was no help that could work. "Days collect[ing] like standing water" is such a vivid depression analog. This holds up to the very best of short form poetry I've read lately.

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Profile picture of user: lyra

thank you so much friend 💕 surprisingly, this one kind of just wrote itself with hardly any editing haha