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Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

The first line simile is so well done, in fact delightful. The 'crime scene' part is so true heh. You wrote for this contest so well and on such short notice. Blown away by your brain 🧠

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Profile picture of user: creativechronicle

This feedback made my day! I was worried the similes felt too heavy, but ‘delightful’ is the best word I could hear. Thanks for noticing the crime scene line — that one text really do be like that 😭 Really glad it landed well even on short notice. Your brain emoji made me grin ðŸ§