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Allowables by Nikki Giovanni I killed a spider Not a murderous brown recluse Nor even a black widow And if the truth were told this Was only a small Sort of papery spider Who should have run When I picked up the book But she didn't And she scared me And I smashed her I don't think I'm allowed To kill something Because I am Frightened *Leaving this for anyone who wants to read the original poem

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Thank you for letting us see this version

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Love what you did to your poem. A whole new perspective yet a powerful one❤️