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Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

"Breathes," "breathless," "barking," "blotches." Love this alliteration. It punctuates each each word, working for each, and culminating in that very spilled blotchiness. Very nice!

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Profile picture of user: james_j_quill

Really you are too kind..thank you so much for reading ♥️🙏🏼